HELP! I completely suck at Marketing
Seriously, I must completely suck at Marketing!
What's wrong with this letter I wrote as an invitation:
Come join me on Be Wealthy Tomorrow on Yahoo Groups...
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> JPBerry has invited you to join Be Wealthy Tomorrow.
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> I believe we can change the world and have designed a system to do that. If you share the desire and belief that you can improve your own condition by improving the conditions of others you can use this system to Be Wealthy Tomorrow.
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> Click here to join:
> http://finance.groups.yahoo.com/group/BeWealthyTomorrow/
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> Thanks,
> JPBerry


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I'm confused....? :P