A Simple way to improve your Ads.

Written by JF Grissom on Sep 3, 2008 12:21 am

Read More: Marketing | Social Networking

I posted this to Zenzuu.com it is a free network marketing social network. I have gotten some good feedback from users at Zenzuu so I hope it is useful to others here...

Join this Free MLM here. I joined simply because it is another avenue for social networking.

The Blog I posted there is related to getting a better response from ads.

Here is the blog I posted there I hope you enjoy it -----------------------------------------------------------------------

If you are at all serious about building up your Zenzuu downline then you need to here this story.

Joe and Jane each started a small business.Joe put out advertisements that talked all about the technology and fancy widgets that his company offered. His ads looked something like this...

Pentium Xeon Multiplexed Fancy Social Network!

Designed with cool MicroCraft ASPX technology.

Join today it's free!

But Jane Ran an Ad that showed what someone would want and how they can get it. Her Ad looked like this.

Get paid To Meet People, Share Photos, Blog, and Chat!

New Kind Of Social Network Pays Its Members!

No out of pocket expense to Join.

Now the question is who do you think did better? Jane did and here is why... Nobody cares about the technology or how fancy it is... they only care about what they get out of it...This doesn't mean people are bad... or crazy... it just means anyone you share this with needs to know how it is valuable to them...

Someone reading Joe's ad may not know what ASPX is.But is is not likely that some one is going to scratch their head in confusion regarding Jane's add.Ask your self which would you respond too?

The only two reasons anyone will sign up with you are:

1) They like you.

2) The see you have something worthwhile to offer them.

If they don't know you ... then they need to see immediately what it is they will get if they follow you (or your link... or your advertisement.)

Another way to think of it... When Apple iPods came out did they say...

10 GB Hardrive with 40 Decible Speakers

and a 3 inch monochrome display.

Or did they say...

10,000 songs in your pocket.

Think about your ads and you'll get better results.

Make sure your ads lead someone to something they want...

Best Wishes On Your New Business!