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Re: Website Critique Wanted: What'cha Think?

Postby Daniel Attard on Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:13 am

Good landing page. Richard has some great advice. The webpage footer should have a Disclaimer and Terms of Use section.

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Re: Website Critique Wanted: What'cha Think?

Postby Sonny Lanorias on Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:23 am

Great job Jamaul
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Re: Website Critique Wanted: What'cha Think?

Postby Rob Hammond on Tue Feb 01, 2011 8:29 pm

Im looking for a quick critique.

Really great. I was very tempted to opt in. I think you'll have to experiment; I think this this will do very well with most ad sources.
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Re: Website Critique Wanted: What'cha Think?

Postby Shawn Brooks on Tue Feb 01, 2011 11:00 pm

Jamual,

Eeveryone so far has provide some solid feedback. Overall, the site achieved what the goal was and it does make a person want to opt-in. I love the wording to draw a person to want to know more.

You could create a few different test version to see which one receives the most responses.

You're off to a great start and I wish you much success.
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Re: Website Critique Wanted: What'cha Think?

Postby harry stevens on Wed Apr 20, 2011 7:30 pm

I must say, for once Im actually quite impressed.

Good job buddy
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Re: Website Critique Wanted: What'cha Think?

Postby Tadas Luksys on Thu May 26, 2011 2:24 am

Jamaulfinley wrote:HI Everyone,

It's been a while since. It feels good to be back. But I need your help!

Is Attraction Marketing Dying?

I'm testing a new site's copy and I desperately need some feedback.

Here's the link:
http://mlmleverageblueprint.com/

Please do not opt-in. The form will not take you anywhere.

I appreciate the love shown in these forums.

Thanks everyone.

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Re: Website Critique Wanted: What'cha Think?

Postby Ehi Okoduwa on Thu May 26, 2011 6:18 am

I thought the site was crowdy. I liked what Bravo did. I have not built my site, I am looking for a template i can buy and edit, anyone with ideas?
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