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Postby Alex Headley on Sun Sep 12, 2010 7:17 pm

I just finally finished this site up with one of my partners and I would like some honest opinions from all yall.

Please check it out and let me know good and bad.

Thanks in advance.

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Re: I need someone to review... Please help

Postby Richard Bravo on Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:51 pm

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Alex it looks like its just an iframe of your company capture page on your domain...
Is there something specific you want feedback on?
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Re: I need someone to review... Please help

Postby Alex Headley on Mon Sep 13, 2010 1:00 pm

Yes thats what it is, I just need some feed back, some other eyes looking at it and I thought I would ask yall for some help.

Just overall, thats all im looking for.
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Re: I need someone to review... Please help

Postby Josephine Payge on Mon Sep 13, 2010 1:17 pm

It's not my cup of tea, but it's professional.

Bets of luck with it!

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Re: I need someone to review... Please help

Postby Graham J OConnor on Mon Sep 13, 2010 3:07 pm

Hi Alex, not my cup of tea either. It looks a bit "cartooney" and would benefit from a few more words on the page.
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Re: I need someone to review... Please help

Postby Don Egnor on Sat Sep 18, 2010 10:01 am

I think you need more information to help someone make a decision. I would think you get a lot of looky-loos that possibly don't have anything else to do or are looking for the "Next Big Thing" to make a million by 12:43 PM tomorrow. I don't think I would put in my information because there is not enough there to entice me.
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Re: I need someone to review... Please help

Postby Dorina Lanza on Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:00 pm

I went to the site earlier today and as soon as I heard the 1st few words of the video I clicked off. I did not see anything on the page that made me want to watch the video. I just went back now and watched the video. There is nothing in it that made me want to enter my info.

I would suggest that you find something newer, fresher, more compelling - something unique to you to put up there. Right now it looks kinda like everything else.

Hope this helps!
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Re: I need someone to review... Please help

Postby Christian Fioravanti on Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:51 pm

Well, at least its very easy to navigate through. Anyone with half a brain could figure out how to go from step 1 to step 2 and that is important.

Its not super unique to those of us who are online marketers and see this stuff all the time, but for offliners it should be totally new to them.

Hope it converts well for you!

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Re: I need someone to review... Please help

Postby Alex Headley on Wed Sep 29, 2010 2:24 am

Thanks all for your reviews I really needed the outside eyes!

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Re: I need someone to review... Please help

Postby Martina Mascali on Wed Sep 29, 2010 1:53 pm

I dont like this kind of websites that only put a video and 4 phrases because there are milions of webpages like this one and I never feel attracted to them, probably because I know that 99% of them are scam.
However is not my field so Im not a specialist, but I can suggest you to add some more text.

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