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[Richard Michalsky Contribution Level: 1]

Hi everyone,
I want some general feedback on capture pages good or bad. I haven't had many sign ups recently through my MS capture page so I decided to create my own capture page to see if it would be any better. Has anyone that has done this found better results. If you have a few minutes would you take a look at my new capture page and give me any criticisms or suggestions on how to improve it.
I WANT TO STATE RIGHT HERE THAT I AM NOT ADVERTISING I SIMPLY WANT SOME ADVICE.
If you do have a few spare moments will you please take a look and let me know. my page can be found at
http://www.meet-agel.com/presentation

Thank you!

[Vernon Harleston Contribution Level: 1]

What are you doing to drive traffic to your site. I haven't gotten a bite there either but I haven't done anything to get my links & sites on front street either.

Hay I just reviewed your capture site and I liked it I saw no problems with it. I hope you get a lot of people to sign up. Justin

[Nathaniel Johnson Contribution Level: 6]

in all honesty I would run as far away from a company like that as possible. To me, after intensely looking over meet-agel.com including their products (just magic potions), their background and the type of marketing atmosphere it has, that entire system looks like a bunch of hype. Fluff, cliches what ever you want to call it, it is systems like that which rape the new marketer's hopes and ambitions turning them into discouragement down the road.



good luck

[Marty Baker Contribution Level: 5]

You Should not lead with your Business. You need to establish Yourself as a Leader before people will follow you. If you have read MS you should understand this, if you don't understand you might try reading it again. Best of Luck to you.

[Nathaniel Johnson Contribution Level: 6]

You Should not lead with your Business. You need to establish Yourself as a Leader before people will follow you. If you have read MS you should understand this, if you don't understand you might try reading it again. Best of Luck to you.

I do not think they were trying to lead with their business, this user was simply inquiring about feedback on their catch page.

Did you read the original topic?

[Marty Baker Contribution Level: 5]

I do not think they were trying to lead with their business, this user was simply inquiring about feedback on their catch page.

Hopefully you understand that he is intending to market this page because he has not had much success with his MS capture page so if he is out there marketing this Capture Page he is leading with his business. I was not Saying that he was promoting his Business with this post. Please try and understand what is going on before you Criticize someones Post.

Especially after you Posted this about his Business.

in all honesty I would run as far away from a company like that as possible. To me, after intensely looking over meet-agel.com including their products (just magic potions), their background and the type of marketing atmosphere it has, that entire system looks like a bunch of hype. Fluff, cliches what ever you want to call it, it is systems like that which rape the new marketer's hopes and ambitions turning them into discouragement down the road.

So I stand behind my original Post.

And by the way it looks like a company replicated site, so how would you make changes?

[Adam Taha Company: Amway Contribution Level: 7]

Ok, I looked at your site. Brillaint layout. That I can't fault but, and this is just my opinion,

1. Who are you? I don't mean your business but you...who are you? What's your story mate?

I see opportunity, business, but I don't see you, you're story. Be good to see that in first page but maybe, you can't use it because of company policy etc.

2. I do agree, in regards to branding oneself, and establising one self as a leader because there's quiet a few and will be more, with capture pages, nice, glossy, professional but what will set you apart from them is you, your own branding, establishing and positioning yourself as a leader in that field.

I will say, good on ya mate for stepping up, sharing what you're doing to find other people's opinions. And for at least getting in there and doing it. I like the quality too, well done.

So congrats on that mate and thanks for sharing.

Adam

[Nathaniel Johnson Contribution Level: 6]

this message is to mbaker417

Listen,

I understand completely this person is trying to market his page. But what are any of us doing here to that extent? Your statement can be applied pretty much to all of us here. The point is here wanted feedback on his page and not a lecture on how to market his business.

Anyone can lecture, but not everyone is willing to bring benefit to someone random even when that someone cannot bring benefit to themselves...

[Richard Michalsky Contribution Level: 1]

You Should not lead with your Business. You need to establish Yourself as a Leader before people will follow you. If you have read MS you should understand this, if you don't understand you might try reading it again. Best of Luck to you.

Thank you For your Feedback... and understanding that I'm Not advertising My Business Here. I Will Work on Promoting myself and not my business. I will improve my capture page and let you know when it is finished.

Make it a Great Day! Wishing you continued success in all you do…