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[Barry Burns Company: Life Force International Contribution Level: 1]

I can see you've updated your page now, which is good because many of the comments in this forum were right no target.

So it's better ...

But text is still hard to read. Rather small.

The content isn't very unique or enticing.

I know you're sincerely looking for honest feedback, so I'll tell you that for me the photo is hurting your page. One of the most important things to do is build rapport with your visitors and the expression on your face is a bit off-putting.

Just one person's opinion, but that was the first impression I had when I viewed your page.

[Jeffrey Chew Company: Vemma Nutrition Company Contribution Level: 2]

Hi,

Saw your newly revamp website. It's clear, clean and professional.

But the sub header (below) is a bit small.

Are you still struggling to reach your goals with your MLM? Are you fed up cold-calling leads who don't give a damn about you, your company or your product? Would you like to learn step-by-step the system that has created countless MLM "Heavy Hitters"?

Try to do as below...

Are you still struggling to reach your goals with your MLM? Are you fed up cold-calling leads who don't give a damn about you, your company or your product? Would you like to learn step-by-step the system that has created countless MLM "Heavy Hitters"?

See the difference...........

Other than that, I think MLMBlitz have it covered.

Regards
Jeffrey