by susan coils on Thu Sep 04, 2008 4:46 pm
Hi Tyrone (Nico?)
I have to admit your capture page certainly grabs the attention immediately! Boy, is it bright? LOL I would cut back on all the different colours. Sometimes less is more!
You say you are dedicated to helping people succeed, but, all you are offering is to pay for someone to join your biz. I agree you have to give somethign more than this.
How are you going to get people to stick around if they haven't found 3 people to pay it forward to, before they have to fork out for their own payment? Are you going to help them with marketing, advertising, follow up, etc?
Also, there's a lot of opps out there using the 'pay it forward' system, so I think you need to give a little bit more of what makes this one so different.
And the idea of 'paying it forward' is to not expect anything in return, yet every business uses the idea on the basis that you will get something back - money! To me personally, the two don't go together, but I can see why it's an attractive proposition.
Okay, I finally opened up.

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