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Postby Tyrone Swainson on Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:34 pm

Thanks.. I'd really like you guys to take a look at my capture page and tell me what you think of it.

http://www.stepbystepincomeplan.com/

I know I broke all the rules by not making it "Blind" but this is my first capture page so I'm still learning. Thanx! :D

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Re: Help with my capture page please

Postby tyrone swainson on Thu Sep 04, 2008 1:10 pm

Anbody? lol sorry i'm the same person..this is my old account from magnetic sponsoring.

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Re: Help with my capture page please

Postby Marty Baker on Thu Sep 04, 2008 3:25 pm

It seems a too busy to me and you need to have a free give away like a report on network marketing or some free software. take a look at this one. http://1.flowcharttowealth.com
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Re: Help with my capture page please

Postby susan coils on Thu Sep 04, 2008 4:46 pm

Hi Tyrone (Nico?)

I have to admit your capture page certainly grabs the attention immediately! Boy, is it bright? LOL I would cut back on all the different colours. Sometimes less is more!

You say you are dedicated to helping people succeed, but, all you are offering is to pay for someone to join your biz. I agree you have to give somethign more than this.

How are you going to get people to stick around if they haven't found 3 people to pay it forward to, before they have to fork out for their own payment? Are you going to help them with marketing, advertising, follow up, etc?


Also, there's a lot of opps out there using the 'pay it forward' system, so I think you need to give a little bit more of what makes this one so different.

And the idea of 'paying it forward' is to not expect anything in return, yet every business uses the idea on the basis that you will get something back - money! To me personally, the two don't go together, but I can see why it's an attractive proposition.
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Re: Help with my capture page please

Postby tyrone swainson on Thu Sep 04, 2008 11:15 pm

Thanx guys I really appreciate it. I changed it: http://www.stepbystepincomeplan.com

San, the more I think about it is the less I want to promote the Pay It Forward system online. It works but it mostly works for people locally. My team has been having great success with it. Online...I'm not so sure..

I was just experimenting with it.

I did intend to help all my prospects with marketing, follow ups etc. Should I have mentioned that on the page?

Marty: when you say offer something free doesn't specifically have to be related to the subject matter? I don't have a Pay it Forward ebook or Pay it Forward report. So could I just offer ANY free Ebook

By the way, I've been marketing to my Magnetic Sponsoring list for a while now...most of them still haven't bought the book. Could I pitch them my opportunity?

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Re: Help with my capture page please

Postby susan coils on Fri Sep 05, 2008 4:14 am

Hi Nico

Yes, you need to let people know that you are going to help them achieve success in this business. You are what will make the difference, not the system.

Have you read Mike's latest newsletter? Do you understand why he isn't going to give you a pony? There is nothing wrong with paying it forward. That is the whole principle behind MS - give without want!

Whatever you give away needs to be related to what you're offering - but not on Paying it forward as you're describing. Training/tips/support/advice/coaching... on marketing, traffic, social networking, magnetic sponsoring, etc tools and resources that they can use to build their business, without relying on someone hitching up just because they want the free pony!

When you give people these skills, then you set them up to be able to truly 'pay it forward' themselves.

If your MS prospects haven't bought the book, what makes you think they're going to be interested in your business? By all means, shoot them an e-mail and ask if you can help them with anything, but be prepared to help them with their business before you start worrying about whether they want to join yours.
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Re: Help with my capture page please

Postby tyrone swainson on Fri Sep 05, 2008 12:23 pm

GOTCH YA!
www.hotchocolatebiz.com

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Re: Help with my capture page please

Postby Marty Baker on Fri Sep 05, 2008 2:43 pm

I think your free offer should have something to with what you are trying to Market or how to market it. So it could be a free report on Internet Marketing or Some free software that will help them with internet marketing like I have on my Capture Page
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