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[Francisco Arache Contribution Level: 1]

Plese give me feedback on this page

http://access.wealthynetworker.com/accessnow.html

Francisco

[susan coils Contribution Level: 4]

Hi Francisco
My first impression isn't that good.

Your headline has some letters capitalised and not others so it looks a bit sloppy.

The graphic looks really fuzzy, but that could be my browser, been having some problems lately with FF.

There's not enough white space between your bullets so they don't stand out.

The page is personalised with 'get my free report', 'I want to show', but there's nothing on the page to say who you are or why your free report would be worth having more than someone else's.

Also, I'd be tempted to say 'simply' instead of 'just' when asking for the email address. 'just' sounds like handing over your email is no big deal but in fact, you want them to know that it is a big deal but the reward will be worth it.

[Steven Taylor Contribution Level: 1]

The graphic looked a little fuzzy to me, too.
Can anyone give me advice on how to make a page like that
or maybe a link where I can read a tutorial?

[Francisco Arache Contribution Level: 1]

Ok Updated

http://access.wealthynetworker.com

[Rebecca Holman Contribution Level: 2]

Your last attempt looks good. I wondering how you are doing with traffic and conversions?

Let me know if I can help.

[James Hannan Company: Mannatech Inc. Contribution Level: 2]

Hi
I love what you are doing. well done!
Your points make me want more and to leave my details.
What would make it even better is if I could read a little about you. What makes you who you are. This would make me trust you more.
Even if you are just getting started you could write something like: "After trying and failing more times than I could point a stick at, I came across a revolutionary system that is taking me from..... to ..... and you get learn all the mistakes I made so you don't make them plus strategies that are working for me and the people I am working wiht all over the world. (also put a little bit in there about you and your family if you have one)"
Hope this helps
James
www.workfromhomeaustralia.com

[JonMarc Wright Company: Usana Health Sciences, Inc. Contribution Level: 3]

First off, the updated page is 100% better than the previous.

Now it is time to promote it and split-test the heck out of it.
Here are a couple of ideas for the split test:

Throw an intro video explaining who you are and what you have to offer above the bullets and capture form.

Test out some different background box/color variations - I'd start with the bullets, and I'd probably use a box with rounded corners, but you can also test out some straight background color things like put some of your sales copy on top of a colored background to draw it out.

If you can get some people giving you testimonials, you might throw a few in there and split-test for most effective placement, etc.

Test out some different button text, colors, possibly animations, etc.

I can help you out with animations if you'd like. If you have an image and you'd like it to move slightly or something like that to split-test, I can make animations really quickly in photoshop so feel free to shoot me a pm.

Overall, it is not bad at all. It looks clean and simple and I like that.

I'd clean up the html code if it were me, but I'm a coder and enjoy that sort of thing!

Take care,

jM

[Boel Stoddard Company: Enagic USA, Inc. Contribution Level: 2]

"We Understand You Want to Protect Your Privacy. But the Must Have Information in This FREE REPORT is so Valuable We Are Giving You Access to It Below Anyway."

I am not sure what this means? It does not really make sense to me as it is written right now. First you say it is important to your prospect to protect their privacy - then, rather than reassuring them that their privacy WILL be protected you proceed with a statement that you will be giving access to your information "anyway". As a prospect, this would just seem like a confusing statement to me...

Boel