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So.. Here comes in depth analysis. I'll try cover everyones questions. I've been doing graphic & web design for MANY years, and SEO for about 3 years. Marketing I've done since 99, and even took it in college. Take that as you will, but here's my professional opinion. It's not personal to anyone, I'm just trying to help. =)
1. http://newtrendspot.com/ - Turn Fitness Into CashWhat exactly is going on here? Your concept, and your title seem to have little to do with one another. Great work trying to get things up keep going. Excellent template choice.
1. Your Color Choices Are FAR too busy.
Too many colors add to the distraction, and take away from the content. Some ideas for you to take a look at to help your color choices:
http://www.hypergurl.com/colormatch.phphttp://www.colorblender.com/neither is better, but pick one to create your blends.
2. Make Sense
Use this tool to do some research on keyword competition vs. search volume:
Google Keyword ToolOnce you find a list of terms with high search volume, and low competition start searching to see if you can't find that term as a domain name. You want niche-specified terms, not broad terms. The more 'longtailed'/specific your keywords are, the better you will do.
Aside from this, by making sense - I mean your title and your subject should match. In order to do that, browse your health related biz ops for keywords, keep moving till you find something. Make that into your url, then your subject will match more specifically. Right now, I'd leave your page because I have NO idea what it is really about in the first few seconds. It looks very broad, but without a lot of content. Too much searching on my part, thus instantly discredited as a waste of my time.
Please keep in mind, I'm not saying it IS a waste of time, in fact - I'm sure it's brilliant, it's just the initial feeling I get. So that's my shot at helping you. =)
3. More Interesting Graphics
You need some graphics that relate to your topic. That inspire interest, and desire. although cliche, a sixpack abs, or a hot girl... something other than a graphic designers rainbow would work MIRACLES with your site. Pictures speak 1000 words.. So far, you have about 100 words on your page. Add some pictures, add some content.
2. http://www.doonlinebusiness.info/ - Do Online BusinessWell, my initial impression is that A. You're a really nice guy and B. That you are amateur.
My reasoning for this is that in your image, you look sincere, but the actual photo is completely washed out. The 'what pictures of me do i have sitting on my hard drive' look is not what people looking for leaders want. Changing this image to a professional one, would most likely make a world of difference.
The next immediate problem, is improper use of grammar, and big-ass words that the common folk don't understand. You use great language, but it doesn't flow properly. Sometimes using small common sentences works a whole lot better than really ridiculously articulated splendorous awe striking Nobel prize winning paragraph sized sentences that go on and on and on and on and on forever and ever and ever (i did this sentence for dramatic effect)
You WroteSince you are online… and the economy is no great shakes, chances are you would like to use your time making money rather than whiling both away. So here are some ideas I thought to share, which are simple, proven and good…
I Would WriteThe economy isn't getting any better. You need ideas FAST on how to make money. Let me share a few with you now.
The last thing I've got to say, is your side/widget bar looks like a link farm. There is WAY too much going on over there for me to even begin to care about even one of them. If you placed just a few (check my page later on) you could randomly distribute links through your blog postings instead, and add content, as well as explanations of why you are making the referral. You'll most likely have a better clickthrough & conversion rate than posting EVERY affiliate program you've ever seen in the most important real estate on your site (the top 1/3).
Good work however, it's more developed than most in this program. For that, you're awesome. Keep moving forward, or else you're moving backwards.
3. http://daniellelong.blogspot.com/ - This Crazy LifeFirst impression: You are beautiful. Flat out, that's going to work to your advantage for sure! As they say, beauty sells. There's a reason there are no ugly people on TV. I would utilize more images, as well as video of you presenting whatever you're looking to market. (I'm not hitting on you either, just being honest) Your husband/hubby/man also is a looker. I'd put more pics of him, that way you'll appeal to both sexes. Nothing scandalous, modesty speaks volume after all.
Second, your site looks more like a personal blog, which is cool for sure. But I'm unsure of your intentions. I don't know what you want me to look at, and after a few seconds, I begin to feel like a creepy facebook type stalker. At the top of your page, keep images of you and your man, but make sure you make VERY clear what you are going to do for me (the customer).
Lastly, I see you're hosting on blogspot. I'd highly suggest moving over to your own domain, as that way blogspot doesn't own your content. Plus, that way they can't take it down, if someone complains. It's only about $4/month to host a site, and only $9 for a .com domain at godaddy. on checkout, just enter the code
diggnation and it will give you a discount on the domain. They also have great hosting, as it integrates wordpress as well as several other blog formats.
oh, and your facebook link doesn't work.
So, once again - great work - can't wait to see the finished product!
4. http://askdanjohnson.com/ - askdanjohnson.comYou need to add a title to your page. Other than just the URL, the title is crucial advertising on a search engine as it's the big blue title you see for webpages. change it to something like "Dan Johnson Answers Your Questions On..."
You edit this under the 'header' or index under appearance.
As for your GetResponse widget - a couple of things
1. It's too far down the page. fix that.
2. it's in the wrong sidebar/widget area, move it to section 1 (this will move it up the page & it will probably solve your 'off the page' effect, as the widget area it's currently in is a two column section of the sidebar. Either shrink the widget, or move it to section one in your backpage.
3. Your title is repeated, this doesn't work.
4. if you just ask for a name and email, you might get more response. a phone number to someone i don't know is unlikely.
other than that, I like the content, just work on your copywriting skills.
4. http://attractsponsorsucceed.com/ - http://attractsponsorsucceed.com/Same as above... Too many colors, change your title tag to something captivating. add more images, I personally would change the size of your autoresponder. It's rather large by any means. Other than that, things look great! I really like the template.
FINALLY.... LOL, MY RANT IS COMPLETE.So, once again, I'm not trying to insult anyone. I think all your sites are great, these are just the areas that need work. Do not dwell on the negative, instead use it as fuel. =) learn from your mistakes and move forward.
Now is where you can tear me apart, I do love constructive criticism, so please feel free. But I also ignore obsessive negativity. I understand it's not perfect, but just like all of you - this is a work in progress.. That said, does anyone else wish this course were moving at a slightly faster pace?
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