by Steve Wood on Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:20 am
Remko, I hate to be like Simon Cowell on American Idol and be so negative but you asked for advice.
The first thing I saw was the video was over 13 minutes long! It has to start off powerful and stay powerful to keep the attention of people today. Yours did not do that for me. Sorry.
The second thing is that most people now are looking for a LEADER and not a company or compensation plan. There are tons of both but people want to know how you can help them succeed.
I did not continue to watch the video but these are the 2 things I saw right off. Hope this helps and maybe others who comment here will see things a bit different than me.
To Your Success,
Steve