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Re: Feedback needed for new Landing Page

Post by ilkaflood on Mon Dec 27, 2010 8:15 pm

tamdang wrote:
ilkaflood wrote:Hi Tam,

I didn't see anything wrong with the headline. But if this is a landing page, it's missing the opt-in box to capture your visitor's information.

Also, and that's just me ... the video is more of a tutorial for the system (and quite long.) Most people might not be patient enough to sit through it as we're all very busy. Especially since it doesn't show how long it will be.

I think for a landing page where you capture the information of your visitors it would be better if it was "Short & Sweet" and then give them more information later. When people first come to your page they don't know anything about your product and they may get overwhelmed with all the info in the tutorial.

Okay after about 18 minutes in the "purchase button" came up.

Tell you the truth, if I just landed on your page without you asking for feedback, I wouldn't have stayed around long enough to see that button.

Just my thoughts ;)


Hi ilka,

Does a Landing page have to have an opt-in box? can't it just sell. If it's needed to use the correct term then let me be corrected and say that this is a sales page :)

I thank you for your feed back, what you're saying is absolutely GOLD on all three accounts. I need to make some adjustments.

Thanks again

Tam


Hi Tam,

Yes, I guess it could just "sell." But people need to stick around for about 18 minutes for the "buy now" button to show up. They might not stay that long.

Here are my thoughts behind my suggestion of an opt-in box...

If you don't capture your visitors' information ...and they also don't buy (which they rarely do on the first exposure) you will lose them forever. They won't come back to your page. That's lost revenue.

For example, I very seldom buy something the first time I see it. But if you captured my curiosity and you have something I might be interested in, I'll sign up for more information. Thus you can slowly reel me in :D

Make sense?

You could try some split testing and see which works better for you ;)

Re: Feedback needed for new Landing Page

Post by tamdang on Mon Dec 27, 2010 5:39 pm

Ramya wrote:I would say that the headline is a little bit too long.

Also, I would put more text on a landing page, not just a headline and a video.
Like Ilka said, it is a good idea to put an opt-in form to catch the visitor's email address.


Thank you too Svetlana your feedback is much appreciated.

Tam

Re: Feedback needed for new Landing Page

Post by tamdang on Mon Dec 27, 2010 5:35 pm

ilkaflood wrote:Hi Tam,

I didn't see anything wrong with the headline. But if this is a landing page, it's missing the opt-in box to capture your visitor's information.

Also, and that's just me ... the video is more of a tutorial for the system (and quite long.) Most people might not be patient enough to sit through it as we're all very busy. Especially since it doesn't show how long it will be.

I think for a landing page where you capture the information of your visitors it would be better if it was "Short & Sweet" and then give them more information later. When people first come to your page they don't know anything about your product and they may get overwhelmed with all the info in the tutorial.

Okay after about 18 minutes in the "purchase button" came up.

Tell you the truth, if I just landed on your page without you asking for feedback, I wouldn't have stayed around long enough to see that button.

Just my thoughts ;)


Hi ilka,

Does a Landing page have to have an opt-in box? can't it just sell. If it's needed to use the correct term then let me be corrected and say that this is a sales page :)

I thank you for your feed back, what you're saying is absolutely GOLD on all three accounts. I need to make some adjustments.

Thanks again

Tam

Re: Feedback needed for new Landing Page

Post by tamdang on Mon Dec 27, 2010 5:25 pm

Darreguin wrote:Even when hosting your video on your own server is a great idea, the problem is exactly what happened when I got there. Video wasn't loading.

You can upload it to YouTube and set the video to "unlisted" so that the only way someone can see it is if they have the direct link.


You're absolutely right I see what you mean, I had friend looked at the site and he couldn't see anything either. Thanks for the idea.

Re: Feedback needed for new Landing Page

Post by Ramya on Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:15 am

I would say that the headline is a little bit too long.

Also, I would put more text on a landing page, not just a headline and a video.
Like Ilka said, it is a good idea to put an opt-in form to catch the visitor's email address.

Re: Feedback needed for new Landing Page

Post by ilkaflood on Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:06 am

Hi Tam,

I didn't see anything wrong with the headline. But if this is a landing page, it's missing the opt-in box to capture your visitor's information.

Also, and that's just me ... the video is more of a tutorial for the system (and quite long.) Most people might not be patient enough to sit through it as we're all very busy. Especially since it doesn't show how long it will be.

I think for a landing page where you capture the information of your visitors it would be better if it was "Short & Sweet" and then give them more information later. When people first come to your page they don't know anything about your product and they may get overwhelmed with all the info in the tutorial.

Okay after about 18 minutes in the "purchase button" came up.

Tell you the truth, if I just landed on your page without you asking for feedback, I wouldn't have stayed around long enough to see that button.

Just my thoughts ;)

Re: Feedback needed for new Landing Page

Post by Darreguin on Mon Dec 27, 2010 7:30 am

Even when hosting your video on your own server is a great idea, the problem is exactly what happened when I got there. Video wasn't loading.

You can upload it to YouTube and set the video to "unlisted" so that the only way someone can see it is if they have the direct link.

Re: Feedback needed for new Landing Page

Post by tamdang on Mon Dec 27, 2010 6:02 am

Excuse me... here's the link http://classifiedmlmtechniques.com/

Feedback needed for new Landing Page

Post by tamdang on Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:48 am

Hi everyone,

Just created a Landing page for LeadNetPro, need some feedbacks on headline. thanks.

Tam

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