here's the link to the article: http://hubpages.com/hub/networkmarketingtoday
here's the link to the video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_VHPohzOz4o
any and all feedback is welcome. Thank guys!
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Matthew Teuschel
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Re: New video and article...feedback please
Hey Matthew,
I have only looked at the article itself. The content and your message is good in my opinion. The only suggestion wud be to shorten down and maybe make 2 or possibly 3 articles, create a series. The key is often to give sufficient information so that the reader will be extra keen to want more later.
Love the use of graphics, excellent.
Cheers, Peter
I have only looked at the article itself. The content and your message is good in my opinion. The only suggestion wud be to shorten down and maybe make 2 or possibly 3 articles, create a series. The key is often to give sufficient information so that the reader will be extra keen to want more later.
Love the use of graphics, excellent.
Cheers, Peter
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Peter Grimes
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Re: New video and article...feedback please
Very good stuff, I would suggest to not deliver too much content. People nowadays are very ADD when it comes to reading and getting new information. You want to catch their interest fast and get to the point of what they are looking for. Always end with more information for the prospect to gain on the other side of the link.
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Grant sevek
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Re: New video and article...feedback please
Wassup?
Hey, I looked at your content and it's pretty good. The video is darn slick as well and you've done the right thing of putting your URL at the top of the video description for all to see.
One thing, I've been getting some huge results by using long-tailed keywords for my videos instead of generic ones. The trick is, input your long-tailed keywords comma separated and hit 'Save.'
BINGO! YouTube wraps them and they become long-tailed tags! Make sure you use the same phrase in your title and content (The video too! Voice algorithms y'know?) and you're done!
Have fun with this!
Hey, I looked at your content and it's pretty good. The video is darn slick as well and you've done the right thing of putting your URL at the top of the video description for all to see.
One thing, I've been getting some huge results by using long-tailed keywords for my videos instead of generic ones. The trick is, input your long-tailed keywords comma separated and hit 'Save.'
BINGO! YouTube wraps them and they become long-tailed tags! Make sure you use the same phrase in your title and content (The video too! Voice algorithms y'know?) and you're done!
Have fun with this!
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Vincent Muir
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Re: New video and article...feedback please
Hey Matt - a great article and video. Here's my only suggestion. Your video is embedded in your Hubpages article which is a great thing to do. At the end of the video you instruct people to "click the link on the left found in the description". Only thing is, the description field is not there on Hubpages like it would be on YouTube. Obviously this is also a problem on other video sharing sites.
You might want to address that by saying something like "if you don't see the description or clickable link next to this video then please visit whatever.com" And at the end of the video display the link you want them to visit. I've posted many videos here on BN.com and all of them end with this so go check out one of mine if you'd like to see an example.
@Vincent, when you say "One thing, I've been getting some huge results by using long-tailed keywords for my videos instead of generic ones. The trick is, input your long-tailed keywords comma separated and hit 'Save.'" Are you talking about you put this info into your description or is this what you're doing the "Tags" field?
You might want to address that by saying something like "if you don't see the description or clickable link next to this video then please visit whatever.com" And at the end of the video display the link you want them to visit. I've posted many videos here on BN.com and all of them end with this so go check out one of mine if you'd like to see an example.
@Vincent, when you say "One thing, I've been getting some huge results by using long-tailed keywords for my videos instead of generic ones. The trick is, input your long-tailed keywords comma separated and hit 'Save.'" Are you talking about you put this info into your description or is this what you're doing the "Tags" field?
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Daniel Herzner
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Re: New video and article...feedback please
VincentMuir wrote:Wassup?
Hey, I looked at your content and it's pretty good. The video is darn slick as well and you've done the right thing of putting your URL at the top of the video description for all to see.
One thing, I've been getting some huge results by using long-tailed keywords for my videos instead of generic ones. The trick is, input your long-tailed keywords comma separated and hit 'Save.'
BINGO! YouTube wraps them and they become long-tailed tags! Make sure you use the same phrase in your title and content (The video too! Voice algorithms y'know?) and you're done!
Have fun with this!
Thanks for the feedback Vincent. What do you mean by putting in commas? Does that mean that if I had a keyword like how to generate more leads for example, I would put commas in between all of the words?
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Matthew Teuschel
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